tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5363217169984437356.post398775920083713169..comments2023-09-26T06:04:15.883-07:00Comments on Run Gwen, Run!: First Platform- Building Campaigner ChallengeGwen Gardnerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13132836346305559246noreply@blogger.comBlogger34125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5363217169984437356.post-76122177613282982512011-10-01T12:58:16.278-07:002011-10-01T12:58:16.278-07:00@Medeia, I hope there were no noises in the night,...@Medeia, I hope there were no noises in the night, LOL!<br /><br />@J.L., I'd never pull the covers over my head in real life, LOL! I'd be prowling the house:)Lady Gwenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13132836346305559246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5363217169984437356.post-339192953959583772011-10-01T12:57:30.246-07:002011-10-01T12:57:30.246-07:00You've done much with the spook factor. I want...You've done much with the spook factor. I wanted to pull the covers over my head too.J.L. Campbellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05666634455836834179noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5363217169984437356.post-47097459733298685922011-10-01T12:56:31.294-07:002011-10-01T12:56:31.294-07:00Spooky. I hope this doesn't give me nightmares...Spooky. I hope this doesn't give me nightmares when I go to bed soon. Great job.<br /><br />I'm a new follower from the campaign. Have a wonderful weekend.Medeia Sharifhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13380615566351521664noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5363217169984437356.post-88696922831034076662011-10-01T12:55:37.580-07:002011-10-01T12:55:37.580-07:00@Doreen, so true - scary either way, LOL!
@Claire...@Doreen, so true - scary either way, LOL!<br /><br />@Claire, I'm pretty sure we've all been home and gotten scared at some point!Lady Gwenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13132836346305559246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5363217169984437356.post-18507926022954600072011-10-01T12:54:50.253-07:002011-10-01T12:54:50.253-07:00Fellow campaigner saying hello.
This piece works ...Fellow campaigner saying hello.<br /><br />This piece works well because it feeds off of the fears we've all had at one time or another. Like the imagery too!<br /><br />ClaireBucksWriternoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5363217169984437356.post-27649277560319364352011-10-01T12:54:06.596-07:002011-10-01T12:54:06.596-07:00Scary either way:)Scary either way:)Doreennoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5363217169984437356.post-85009992548316567942011-10-01T12:53:28.900-07:002011-10-01T12:53:28.900-07:00Sarah, I wouldn't like either a ghost or intru...Sarah, I wouldn't like either a ghost or intruder in my bedroom, but I think I'd choose the ghost, LOL!Lady Gwenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13132836346305559246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5363217169984437356.post-26991577869519865202011-10-01T12:52:42.673-07:002011-10-01T12:52:42.673-07:00I enjoyed this. I think I'd rather it was an i...I enjoyed this. I think I'd rather it was an intruder than what it actually was :-)Sarah Pearsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13273148070092101085noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5363217169984437356.post-9115042883858151002011-10-01T12:51:59.566-07:002011-10-01T12:51:59.566-07:00@David, characterization is tough in 200 words, bu...@David, characterization is tough in 200 words, but since she was paralyzed with fear, and couldn't/wouldn't/didn't move, I guess that says something about her!<br /><br />@Angela, good idea - just to be on the safe side, LOL!Lady Gwenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13132836346305559246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5363217169984437356.post-54345484237830230952011-10-01T12:51:10.846-07:002011-10-01T12:51:10.846-07:00Oh dear...now I'll have to double-check my loc...Oh dear...now I'll have to double-check my locks at home. This was ripe with suspense and I could feel the MC's fear. Great job.Angela Brownhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03324366495151363782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5363217169984437356.post-15451946857237500512011-10-01T12:50:26.355-07:002011-10-01T12:50:26.355-07:00I don't know a thing about this character, but...I don't know a thing about this character, but I sense the fear. Excellent work, Gwen! :)David Powers Kinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17259276981865439853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5363217169984437356.post-64828960861391616892011-10-01T12:49:40.054-07:002011-10-01T12:49:40.054-07:00Crystal, yeah, it was a ghost even though it was s...Crystal, yeah, it was a ghost even though it was sort of ambiguous. And then the door swung shut...scared myself, LOL!<br /><br /><br />Heather, I creeped myself out! Thanks:)Lady Gwenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13132836346305559246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5363217169984437356.post-63074581929407589262011-10-01T12:48:51.888-07:002011-10-01T12:48:51.888-07:00Theresa, ambiguous, huh?!
Ruth, very creepy - tha...Theresa, ambiguous, huh?!<br /><br />Ruth, very creepy - thanks!<br /><br />Maeve, I noticed the dust motes in yours, too - great minds think alike, LOL!<br /><br />AJ, thanks. I trouble with description in this scene because it was so dialog heavy. <br /><br />Tara, scared ya, huh? Me, too, LOL!Lady Gwenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13132836346305559246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5363217169984437356.post-35174909696586743502011-10-01T12:47:52.287-07:002011-10-01T12:47:52.287-07:00Elizabeth Anne - that'd be my worse nightmare,...Elizabeth Anne - that'd be my worse nightmare, LOL! <br /><br />Bridgette, thanks, I sorta scared myself!Lady Gwenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13132836346305559246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5363217169984437356.post-7910805093369075112011-10-01T12:46:56.811-07:002011-10-01T12:46:56.811-07:00Ooo, creepy! Awesome job.Ooo, creepy! Awesome job.Heather Justesenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16585046213575146355noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5363217169984437356.post-6528298535237316052011-10-01T12:45:54.296-07:002011-10-01T12:45:54.296-07:00Oooh, I got goosebumps, too! You are really good a...Oooh, I got goosebumps, too! You are really good at creating suspense and building tension. I'm thinking it's a ghost just because your MC can't see it and the room grew cold... :-)Crystalnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5363217169984437356.post-75914539458454102362011-10-01T12:45:00.883-07:002011-10-01T12:45:00.883-07:00goosebumps!
nice job building the fear!goosebumps!<br />nice job building the fear!Tara Tylerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07587802105993889515noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5363217169984437356.post-33234239601764739642011-10-01T12:44:06.300-07:002011-10-01T12:44:06.300-07:00Very suspenseful and great use of descriptive lang...Very suspenseful and great use of descriptive language.MorningAJhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04719744167307369768noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5363217169984437356.post-72660514914059038652011-10-01T12:43:07.621-07:002011-10-01T12:43:07.621-07:00Nice job at creating suspense. You and I both used...Nice job at creating suspense. You and I both used 'dust motes' in our stories. :) Liked the way you played yours in.Maeve Frazierhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00788413883600771145noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5363217169984437356.post-51182867118976800772011-10-01T12:42:19.675-07:002011-10-01T12:42:19.675-07:00Very creepy! Great job!Very creepy! Great job!Ruth Hartman Bergehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09854940988819225116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5363217169984437356.post-34845166887972483952011-10-01T12:41:27.028-07:002011-10-01T12:41:27.028-07:00I wonder who the figure could be. Great job creati...I wonder who the figure could be. Great job creating suspense!Theresa Milsteinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03477761307315565259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5363217169984437356.post-36948635004716722132011-10-01T12:40:30.746-07:002011-10-01T12:40:30.746-07:00I really like the tension in this. Its frightening...I really like the tension in this. Its frighteningly relatable. I'm #72bridgetstraub.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5363217169984437356.post-22491784115458833502011-10-01T12:39:34.801-07:002011-10-01T12:39:34.801-07:00Scary stuff. I could feel my heart rate increasing...Scary stuff. I could feel my heart rate increasing! Incredible description. Well done.elizabethannenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5363217169984437356.post-37263016931099532552011-10-01T12:38:54.256-07:002011-10-01T12:38:54.256-07:00D.J. - thank you, ma'am.
Mel - Thank you, my...D.J. - thank you, ma'am. <br /><br />Mel - Thank you, my first flash fiction, really. <br /><br />Angelina - OMG, what happened?Lady Gwenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13132836346305559246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5363217169984437356.post-14544388474021265242011-10-01T12:38:06.193-07:002011-10-01T12:38:06.193-07:00Oooh. Scary. I know that feeling.Oooh. Scary. I know that feeling.Angelina C. Hansenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00769602845843608247noreply@blogger.com