The Challenge is:
Write a blog post in 200 words or less, excluding the title. It can be in any format, whether flash fiction, non-fiction, humorous blog musings, poem, etc. The blog post should:
• include the word "imago" in the title
• include the following 4 random words: "miasma," "lacuna," "oscitate," "synchronicity,"
If you want to give yourself an added challenge (optional and included in the word count), make reference to a mirror in your post.
For those who want an even greater challenge (optional), make your post 200 words EXACTLY!
I MET THE CHALLENGE AND THE EXTRA OPTIONS!
AND SO YOU DON'T HAVE TO LEAVE THIS POST IN ORDER TO GO LOOK UP THE WORDS, I POSTED THE MEANINGS BELOW:
Imago: Insect in its sexually mature adult stage after metamorphosis.
Miasma: Noxious atmosphere.
Lacuna: A gap or space.
Oscitate: Gape or Yawn.
Synchronicity: Events that happen together by chance.
AND HERE IS MY POST.
Imago of a Lost World
AirShip America Log, September 22, 2075.
24:00 hours.
Reached Mariposa. Declared international martial law upon discovering mixed human/alien race in apparent distress. Subsisting mostly in an area called Lacuna, below ground, the unsustainable miasma being above ground. They are barely surviving. The race is surely facing extinction. Entire planet is beginning to oscitate in large areas and increasing daily.
I tapped the pen against my lips. I hadn’t quite figured out what to do with an entire race from a defunct planet.
“What are you planning?” asked First Lieutenant Carmenski. Clearly uneasy, she wanted to begin doing something. Anything.
“They must be evacuated, obviously,” I said, annoyed. I don’t like being rushed into any decision, especially one as important as this.
“But how?” she pushed. Our ship will only carry five hundred more.”
She sat next to me, commanding my attention. “Don’t you think it strange the AASA sent us here? I don’t believe in synchronicity. I think it’s all smoke and mirrors. They knew what they were sending us into.”
“Perhaps,” I said. But I secretly agreed. We landed on a dying planet. The American Aeronautical Space Administration surely knew about it. And sent us all to certain death.
72 comments:
Love the picture and great use of the words!
The words really fit in with the sci-fi feeling of your piece and I like how you used lacuna differently. It sounds like the start of a very interesting story.
I love your sci-fi take on this challenge. You wove the challenge vocabulary intricately through. Awesome job!
J.A., thanks - it was a difficult task.
A.E., my first sci-fi piece - had lots of fun writing it!
Angela, thanks. I absolutely loved your take on the challenge!
Wow, very nice! Love the photo you chose to bring out the Sci-Fi even more! ; )
This is great. Love the Sci-Fi element. Love the ending especially. The words are woven in beautifully. Loved it.
Sheri, it was a fun photo!
K.T., thanks, once I got my head about the meanings of the words, it was fun figuring out how to use them:)
Jeigh, Google all the way!
Nice! And thanks for posting the definitions, because two of them didn't show up in my dictionary app :)
The first science fiction story I've seen so far and it's great. Like the way you use the words.
Sonia, it's awesome, I'm seeing so much variety. Thank you.
I love how you started out with the airship log! Very cool piece. Great job!
Lovely piece of Sci-fi! I could tell your characters had a connection. Opening it up with a log made it all the more unique. I'd read on.
Great job, Gwen! :)
great work w/the prompts! and i love sci fi!
Tara, my first at sci-fi - it was pretty fun. Thanks!
Alynza, Thank you - it took me a while to think this up, LOL!
David, thank you! My first sci-fi piece:)
Great take on the words -- I really liked your sci-fi approach, and starting with the log was, as David said, an excellent idea.
Nice piece, excellent use of the words, at least two of which I've never heard of!
NEAT. lol. I like it. I thought this one was really hard, but I'm seeing such great things come from it :)
Sarah, I didn't know the words either. And when I looked them up, I didn't know how I could possible use them!
Kelly, I love the variety, too!
Elizabethanne, thank you kindly:)
I like "its all smoke and mirrors" I forgot to use mirrors, darn. Mine is #29
Bridget, thank you! Took me a while to think that one up!
I love how you got Lacuna in as a proper noun! Good thinking! And I had to look up the words as well! Mine is #3.
I love the sci-fi take. I love how you layed it out. I could definitely read more!
That was awesome! I love how you used the words in it and the mystery of this dying world. It's good solid sci-fi and I want more.
Great creativity. I liked how you put this in the future despite the Victorian words. Well done!
WOW! Great job, Gwen! That was just really well put-together, and a really clever use of the words. :-)
Excellent, and you managed to get most of the words in that first paragraph. Neatly done.
Nicely done. Love the sci-fi angle.
Love the scifi feel, especially the log at the beginning. Kind of put me back in a star trek mindset. :) Great job!
I love the sci-fi twist, and your creative use of words :)
Wonderful and thanks for including the definitions - very kind.
This was great, it really painted the scene for me! I'm with LadyJai, it put me in a Star Trek mindset also.
Jen, yep, I named the lacuna, Lacuna!
Maeve, thanks - my first sci-fi
Christine, thank you kindly:)
Melodie, are they Victorian words? LOL!
Crystal, thanks. Where's your entry?!
Cheryl, I probably should have spread the words out a bit!
Joshua, my first sci-fi - thanks!
Angie, ditto! My first sci-fi - pretty fun!
Wow Sister what a challenge. Fantastic Job!!
Lady Jai (love your name!), yeah, I was kind of thinking Star Trek "ish".
Stacy, thanks and you're welcome. I had to keep reminding myself what the words meant.
Cortney, reminded me of S.T., too! Strange the things we think of, LOL!
Holy shit, Gwen. This rocks.
The very first part blew me away. You really stretched out into the 200 words as if they were a super-comfortable recliner -- you knew how to use every letter to your advantage. I loved the log and then the shift into the regular narrative!
This was great. I absolutely can't wait to read more!
What a creative, original take on the challenge! I absolutely love your piece. Very, very well done!
Cool, Gwen! That's a great use of the words and I'd read a longer story for this set up.
P.S. Following you now. ; )
RD, thank you so much for your awesome response!
F.E., my first sci-fi - thank you!
Zan, thank you for your kind words!
Anonymous, I can always count on my sister, lol!
This is great. I enjoyed it very much. A lot of thought into it and it came out wonderful.
Love the incorporation of the airship log! Great idea!! Also am a new follower!
Ah, wait, can I follow sans Facebook? (I'm rebelling against the FB Machine.)
Powerful.
Joyce
http://joycelansky.blogspot.com/
Hey, a Sci-Fi entry. Nice job. I like it.
Yes! Great writing.
Fantastic use of the words, Gwen! You did a great job! I think I would read anything you write. :)
I will also pile on to the appreciation-of-word-use bandwagon. Nice work!
This is the first sci-fi piece I've read, and it's amazing.
Have a great weekend.
Gwen, I love the log at the beginning of this. Very cool! I would love to see these characters survive, I really would;)
Ooh, a doomed mission. I really enjoyed this! Great use of dialog.
The Write Soil
Mine is #50.
I never thought about using a scifi slant, perfect for the challenge words! Great job on casting suspicion on the AASA (I'm guessing future NASA?)
Quite refreshing to see a sci-fi take on the challenge. And you used "Lacuna" particularly well. Good job!
That was brilliant, loved how you incorporated the log in the beginning. Loved it.
Miranda, Thanks!
Sandwiched, Thank you and thanks for following.
Joyce, Thank you so much.
Jamie, thank you, my first sci-fi!
Thanks, Niiganab:)
High praise, Carrie - thank you *blushes*
Kurt, thanks!
Medeia, thank you very much!
Christy, I'm flattered!
Dawn, yes, doomed! Thank you:)
Steph, yes - strange words deserve sci-fi! Thank you:)
GK, Lacuna was probably one of the easier words to use. Thank you:)
Patient, thanks - the log seems to be a hit:)
This flows well and the challenge words don't feel misplaced or awkward at all. Best Sci Fi piece I have read so far (got through about 80 so far, phew!).
How are they going to get out of this one? Makes me want to read more!
Joanna, thank you for your kind words. It means a lot!
MC, I don't know how they'll get out of it, lol, but they will - I like happy endings! Thank you.
Ooh, I love SF. But no, I don't want them to die! And then I read the comments and saw it, a way out. I'm a happy ending junkie too. Well, except for flies. So glad you enjoyed mine too.
Such a creative sci-fi take on the 2nd challenge! I admire how gracefully you used all the required words. I'm off to vote of your entry :-)
Sher, lol - yeah, except for flies!
Angela, thank you so much!!! Yay! You're voting for me:)
Brilliant. Love your use of the words and am definitely hooked.
Raelyn, that you so much for your kind words!:)
Oooh, interesting! One of the only sci-fi pieces I've read and *very* nicely done. I like your idea of beginning with the mission log--it allowed you to communicate a great deal of context without it feeling like and info dump.
Creative and intriguing. Good job. Vote from me ;)
Stobby
Very good take on the challenge. Your sci-fi piece read very smoothly. Thanks for the read.
#189
Cheryl, the mission log has been a hit! Thanks for stopping by and commenting:)
Stobby (love the name), thanks for stopping by and "liking" me!
Karen, thanks for stopping by - I'll come by and read your entry, too!
Post a Comment